Why put news on a diet?
The consistent message from media critics such as Jeff Jarvis and online experts such Eric Schmidt of Google is that the MSM still write stories that are much too long online. Especially in an era when more young people are getting their news through cellphones, this is a critical issue in developing a sustainable new online news delivery model.
Toward a new model of online news delivery
This experiment attempts to create a template for online news delivery that would achieve four goals:
- Display news online in a more comprehensible and easy-to-read fashion on computers, cellphones and other devices
- Provide an easily updatable template that allows first-timers to see the full story as it exists on any given day
- Offer archives of previous versions of the template as a record of events over time
- Separate the straight reporting from analysis, opinion and comment, which may reduce reader complaints about bias
To illustrate the concept, I took a story from The Detroit News published on April 9, 2009. I chose it because it is the kind of story we often see in a major urban newspaper, and it is one that will undoubtedly requre continuing coverage.
The first bullet below is the actual story as it appeared in The Detroit News. The second bullet is the same story revised in the new template. It contains all of the information included in the original story but it has been reduced for easy consumption on a computer or a cellphone. (This version can serve as a template for continuing coverage, by archiving some elements while adding updates over time.) The second experiment explores the possibility of using a color-coded template as a home for continuing coverage.
NOTE: Author comments on the experimental pages are in red.
- TRADITIONAL ONLINE STORY: The link below takes you to the Detroit News story about proposed budget cuts for Detroit Public Schools:
- DETNEWS:
(Headline)
- DPS to cut 600, close 23 schools - District manager tries to eliminate deficit; changes trouble parents - Jennifer Mrozowski/ The Detroit News
- DETNEWS:
(Headline)
- EXPERIMENT 1 - Initial Online News Diet Version: The link below takes you to a suggested version of the same story that has been shrink-wrapped.
- (140-Character Tweet) - The tweet below would be posted on the news organization's Twitter account and fed automatically to its Facebook page:
- EXPERIMENT 2 - Update Version of Online News Diet Approach: The link below takes you to a color-coded version of the template that allows the basic information to remain the same, while flagging visitors to new content. It also allows people to access previous versions of the page, by using the Twitter/tweet headlines as links to past versions. (The color-coded items would include an expiry code to move the entries from green to orange to black over time.) This fictional account shows how the template would be updated two days later if parents held a protest rally at DPS headquarters. The link below is again a "tweet" that would take visitors to the page that offer the Continuing Coverage.
MONETIZING THE COVERAGE: For an evergreen asset such as the continuing coverage of the Detroit Schools' budget crisis, news organizations might want to identify advertiser who want to buy a year-long sponsorship. Sponsors would recognize that there might not be new copy every day, but that this is a significant story that will likely be of great interest among parents, teachers and school administrator for many months.